Dear College Coaches,
My main goal is to play the highest level of hockey that I am able to play, that could be anywhere from division one hockey to division three hockey.
What would make me a good candidate for your team is my work ethic and courage. You can ask any coach I have ever played for and they will all say that I am always working hard on and off the ice. They will also tell you that I have never backed away from a battle or have neglected to protect my teammates. Another thing that separates me from other candidates is my ability to balance my schoolwork and play travel hockey. I have always tried hard in school, something my parents taught me to do, and I aspire to get the best grades possible.
So in conclusion I hope you will consider me for your team, not only for my leadership as a captain, but also because of my passion, and my desire to be the best I can be.