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Hi Coaches,
My name is Raylyn Laney, and I play striker and left/right winger as a student-athlete at Pasadena City College (PCC). Previously, I played for Albion SV East Bay in San Leandro, CA. I’ve been playing soccer since I was 8, and my passion for the game has only grown over the years. At Holy Names High School in Oakland, CA, where I graduated, I was the team captain and top scorer.
Soccer is a major part of my life. I constantly watch games to study tactics and improve my own play. Whether it’s learning new moves or finding ways to better myself as a player, I’m always eager to grow.
Academically, I’ve always put in the effort to maintain a GPA of 3.5 or higher, and my college preparatory education has set a solid foundation for my future studies. I was also involved in leadership roles at my high school as a student body member and ambassador, and I continue to seek out leadership opportunities.
In addition to soccer, I have a passion for photography, spending time with my dog, and helping my mother with real estate. These activities help me stay grounded and balanced as I pursue both my academic and athletic goals.
I believe my dedication, leadership, and love for the game make me a strong candidate for your team, and I’m excited to continue growing and contributing at the collegiate level.
Statistic | 2024 Freshman Team |
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Goals | 3 |
Assists | 2 |
Shots on Goal | 17 |
Games Played | 21 |